Editorial Services, Department of Biological Science

Anne B. Thistle, scientific editor


Galleys and Page Proof

I'm available to read and mark galleys and page proof for faculty authors (either instead of or in addition to the author's reading). If you prefer, I'll serve as reading partner. Proofs are given high priority because of the short turn-around time required.

Just bring or send me the proofs (I'm in 4061 King, mail code 4295, e-mail thistle@bio.fsu.edu). Please include all copies of the proofs, the marked typescript if the publisher has returned it, and any instructions the publisher has enclosed.


Manuscript Editing

The FSU Department of Biological Science employs me full-time to help its faculty and staff with tasks related to scientific writing. The majority of requests involve manuscripts for publication in journals, but I'm happy to help with any kind of professional writing, including proposals, course materials, web pages, and vitae. Many faculty members include me routinely as part of the presubmission "friendly review" process.

I provide any level of help the author would like, from simple proofreading through complete rewrite, and I never make any change to a document without the author's approval. Some authors prefer to submit a printout for marking, then to incorporate the changes into the electronic file themselves; others prefer to save time and improve accuracy by having me incorporate the changes. Most frequently, I mark up the electronic manuscript with MS Word's "track changes" and "insert comment" features and return it for the author's approval.

Some commonly requested services are:

  • Checking for correct grammar and punctuation
  • Checking of literature cited for completeness, format, and consistency (in particular, correcting the many small format errors that EndNote invariably introduces)
  • Smoothing of prose written by nonnative speakers of English
  • Shortening of text without deletion of information
  • Conversion from American to British spelling or vice versa
  • Conversion from name-and-date to numerical citations or vice versa (if you've already deleted the EndNote field codes, as you should have before submission, it may be quicker and easier to have me do the conversion by hand than to reinsert them yourself)
  • Conversion of text and references from one journal's format to another's
  • Advice on format and construction of tables and figures
  • Advice on electronic submission of manuscripts
  • Interpretation of journals' format instructions
  • Help with compilation of multiauthor volumes
  • Indexing, especially of book-length manuscripts (read chapter 18 of The Chicago Manual of Style before concluding that your word-processing program can do the job)
  • Rewriting of passages the author finds difficult
  • Answers to grammatical questions

Shortening Text

It depends on your writing style, of course, but I can often shorten scientific prose from 5% to 20% without removing any information content--it's a matter of long practice. If an editor complains your paper is too long, let me take a crack at it before you start deleting information.


Skeptical?

Does this Thistle person know anything about science? Is she going to sit on my manuscript for two weeks? rearrange my wording on whim? destroy my personal writing style? tell me I'm a lousy communicator?

Let me propose a test run. The next time you submit a paper, send me a copy at the same time (tell me it's already been submitted or not, as you prefer, but do let me know what journal it's intended for). Let me work it over, then judge for yourself. If you don't like my changes, no harm done or time lost--the paper's already submitted anyway. If you do, there's still time to incorporate them at the revision stage. You may be surprised at how much time and trouble I can save you if you just worry about the science and let me deal with the publication detail.


Book Editing

I have considerable experience in helping faculty members who have written books or who have, for example, hosted a symposium and are editing the resulting multiauthor proceedings volume. Anyone who has tackled a project of this scale knows how much detail is involved (e.g., putting all the manuscripts in uniform format; smoothing the abrupt style transitions from paper to paper; making sure every paper uses the same variant of neuron/neurone, focused/focussed, and toward/towards and followed the same rules for "ten"/"10" and the serial comma and capitalization after colons; dealing with the publisher's format requirements; checking all the separate literature-cited sections or compiling one large one; constructing the index). I can free you to make just the scientific judgments by doing all this routine work. Professional editing can also save considerable production time and expense, which can hold down the cost of the published book. If you are contemplating such a project, talk to me about setting up the optimal work-flow and record-keeping systems so that the job can go as smoothly as possible.


Indexing

I have indexed many book-length scientific publications. I can offer advice and references on the subject to faculty authors who prefer to do the work themselves, or I can simply compile the index myself. Either way, faculty authors and book editors can save a considerable amount on publication costs.


Database and EndNote library grooming

If you download EndNote or other entries automatically from electronic databases, or if you hire a student to enter them for you, they will be full of errors (particularly in capitalization, hyphenation, abbreviation, and field placement of data), which are then propagated into your literature-cited sections, together with the frequent format errors in EndNote's output templates. I will be happy to proofread your libraries for you periodically, weeding your term lists (particularly the one governing journal names and abbreviations), checking for data in the wrong fields, correcting typos and capitalization errors, regularizing publisher names, etc. I can also edit your output templates as needed, to make them actually match your journals' preferred reference formats.


Course in Scientific Writing

BSC 5936, Scientific Communication, is a three-credit-hour course, offered each spring semester, designed to teach the fundamentals of scientific writing and publishing, as well as other forms of scientific communication.  It is best suited for graduate students who have data ready to be written up for publication, but scientific writers at a wide range of levels should benefit.

I also offer, usually in summer, an informal workshop entitled "English Grammar for Scientific Writers." The workshop is free and open to anyone.


Useful Books

I have many useful reference books and style manuals in my office. Feel free to come by to use them or simply to call or e-mail me with questions. Really, it's my job.


Grammatical Questions

Just what is a split infinitive? What's the difference between "effect" and "affect" again? When can you use "due to"? Does "self-pollination" have a hyphen? Is it "a historic event" or "an historic event"? Why did the editor change "based on" to "on the basis of"? Call (4-5131) or e-mail me. (Of course queries from outside the department can only be addressed on a time-available basis.)